Progress report

Yay progress! Technically, I finished this editing pass today, but I added new material to the Epilogue, so I want to go over that one more time before I really consider it done. I've got the kid tomorrow and Wednesday's kind of booked, but this should be totally done on Thursday. Then I think I'll take a few days to deal with the tax & house crap that's piling up, and then read through it again.