OK, I've written down edits for the whole book--huzzah! I have child-care tomorrow, and then I'll input these edits, and then I need to fix the poetry and ponder the random notes I made for myself. When I'm not getting much done, I tend to make lots of random notes about what should be in the book--sometimes they're really useful and resolve serious problems, but I think most of these fall into the category of extraneous things that would just get cut out again on the next read. We'll see...